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Open Poetry #23

Marathon

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-11-27 06:24 PM

Car passed by;
Lights changed hue,
Yet I was still
Standing
Alone...on the street.

Didn't remember how long has passed;
Didn't remember what came to ears,
Only to find
That I lost my focus.

I wanted to reach out
Yet nothing preceived.
Didn't know what to
Do, standing alone.

I heard music uttered
Yet I couldn't sing a word.
The world's speed seemed...too fast.
I couldn't comprehand
Your conversation last night.

News slipped me by;
Fashions won the marathon.
And I-
Got left behind
At starting line.

//I'm all distracted and unable to focus or grasp information right now.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (11-27-2002 06:35 PM).]

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-11-27 09:42 PM

Well I grasped your poem, and I thought it was a good write. My boyfriend says I'm confused 90% of the time.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2002-11-28 12:41 PM

thanks Miah

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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