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my sacrifice
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my sacrifice |
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brianm Junior Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 16Colorado |
the love must die i must deliver it to the lord what was innocent was embellished the abundance of my love is damning to her walk it is damning to my own she belongs to him and i have selfishly claimed her as my own i must return what i have stolen if i give it back there is still a chance a chance that it might be given to me in the end forgive me she is and will forever be yours humble me in my heart, i have slain her but it is my heart that is failing the void in my chest is to expansive for me to bear resurrect me Lord, as only you can replace the absence with your presence Father, i love you hold me to your breast, and dry the tears that have spilled on my soul |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very deep read. Good write.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, I saw the work that you did on this when you first put it in CA. You hung tough and kept to your original thoughts, while accepting the feedback you were receiving in CA. When I first saw it I flagged it as one to watch. I am glad I did. Thank you for coming to Passions and for sharing your poetry with us. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-27-2002 04:47 PM).] |
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brianm Junior Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 16Colorado |
Thank you both. I have written so much lately, but 'my sacrifice' touched my heart so much as I wrote it. It is a very speacial piece to me. I am happy that I found somewhere to share it. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Love is to be willing to let go. I liked this poem! Thanks for sharing! God Bless! [This message has been edited by Radrook (11-28-2002 08:03 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed this piece of work. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Brian, this reminded me of the Creed song "My Sacrifice", I hope everything is alright, just ask Him and He will come and kiss the tears away and give you the strength to move on and rebuild! (sigh) In send angel hugs of strength your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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