The Love I Don't Understand

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naphoria2k2
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since 2002-10-16

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0 posted 2002-10-16 02:23 AM

Epiphany rivals the hearts of the birthright given; together in consumed temporal eternity, souls exist coinsively as part for their longing to coexist. I, the part of forever forgotten, lay in an aperture of hope. Beautiful forever mastery, I intend on the reliance of this forethought grant, precognated dreams, to create a cultural balance, by exerting beauty with its partner, and vice-versa. This then constitutes equilibrium of evil and sadness, which as by-products of one another, shall habitually torture each other, they are all the same. I have seen in these eyes: honesty, one feeling which surpasses even my own mentality. I have been alone for so long I’ve forgotten how it feels to be venerated, wholesome absolute euphoria. I have seen the rain, and the dew, yet to be exonerated by the sun. I am the wayward sun; the one who guides the seafarer through the tempest. I cannot help but preach to her the ethereal pulchritude that she exhibits. Is this fault? Is it wrong to evangelize the evangelist? This is this vexation I attire. The so-called wondrous torture I’ve acquired. I have touched the skin of an angel, a gleamingly satiny elation. I ache for the contingency to encounter this talisman of endorphinetic harmony again. I request the longing to belong again, not the object to which the thoughtless mind lusts; I desire the heart who is pure, not whom lusts for false love that abuses the meager thought of exhibition, but the one whom my dreams declare the melodious heart befallen unto me. I can only furnish if I unionize. Ah, I believe that she is the heart I wish to cradle the love I have, but if I am wrong, then in implausibility I will dwell, for the love I cannot find.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-16 06:35 AM

Naphoria2K2, Welcome to Passions! Your poem might be better received were it to be placed in a more poetic format, otherwise it might be considered Prose, for which we have a whole other forum for your reading and posting pleasure! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-10-16 07:52 AM

Your writing is exceptional.

Do settle into our Passionate home and make yourself comfy. I'll be looking forward to reading much more from you.

Welcome to Passions...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-16 08:04 AM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a fabulous and powerful debut, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, for now I've been aching and yearning for my love so much and can't afford to let go of her with all my heart and I wish with all my heart for you to hang onto that love! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-16 08:44 AM

Welcome to Passions...
Very interesting thoughts in this first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-16 09:04 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I hope that all this big "family of friends" will make you feel welcome here. They cerainly have me in these last couple of weeks. I've been here less than a month and I LOVE it, as you can tell in some of my poems. I hope you enjoy it here. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
With Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-16-2002 09:05 AM).]

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