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I touch the screen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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sometimes I feel it-- blood for type forgive me? sharing slice of vein Instead of sleep I type the dream-- and pray the taste of bile abstains. sometimes I wonder what is this? "I've left another pool of thought..." sometimes I pray you can't see me within entrails of my own slaught. sometimes I read your words and touch my salty lips and then? I touch the screen... in wonderment-- amazed to find myself again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighhhh I can relate. Wonderful Luscious... especially this.... sometimes I read your words and touch my salty lips and then? I touch the screen... in wonderment-- amazed to find myself again. hugs Maree  |
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Capricious Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 89California, USA |
"'I've left another pool of thought ..'" Marvelous.  I also concur with Maree about the last stanza. Thank you for the smile. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This perfectly describes what happens almost on a daily basis to me, and it never fails to amaze me. In my heart of hearts is ever the ~thank you for telling me more about me~ thoughts and feelings buried, brought to light in sometimes a shocking instant! This is a ~great poem~ Thanks for confirming what I've discovered. So good to know others feel the same. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done witch....but then again you do have a way of casting spells with your words...as do others here. You seem to capture the feel of this very well... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
who knew ice blue could be so warm? (besides us moths)   [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-16-2002 09:08 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you touch more than screen you are more than touch youami b |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang serenity! The last stanza....WOW! I can really relate to this... wonderful...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't think I know how to express gratitude--sometimes, for all my love of words, I find them rather inadequate. But I do humbly thank you all. I touch the screen because YOU touch ME. quiet "thank you" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too know this feeling where I just seem to drift off into la-la land reading your wonderful words and many others then coming back to earth again and I feel dizzy! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Keep touching. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
nodding and asking the same as Mikey......please keep touching. Your words amaze.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
That last stanza is mighty powerful...it gave me a chill...the image leapt off the page... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, YOU touch me with your words. Your words really are amazing to me. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You're beautiful. Kielo |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, "Wonderment" I've a feeling that's not too far from " Bewilderment", seems like I may have passed through there efore (that's kinda like "before", only without 'puters). Anyway, liked your poem, be well. Doc |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
*Nods* ~Yeti |
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