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Like Moon Am I
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Like Moon Am I |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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The crescent moon beckons in tongues sung softly that only I may hear Refuge in her pale light the night a blanket black that comforts me Her silver rays shine subtle light into my room where deep in thought I lay I wish I were more like her but then I think maybe I am sometimes full but mostly half of what all I should be [This message has been edited by Aenimal (11-26-2002 10:59 PM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Beautiful! I love moonlight, the way it makes the shadows dance across the sky and in the world beneath it. Such muted elegance can only be illuminated in the whisper of night!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Your reply is poetry in itself, thank you for the kind words |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Aenimal To be at crescent is good...a changing thing, growing, yet still beautiful. Enjoyed this. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ah! Another spill of moonlight upon these blue pages. And the questing? continues. Don't get so lost within yourself, that you lose your bearings (marbles?) Ed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you Martie very nice words.. Wranx of course you're right and while sometimes I do get lost. But sometimes in losing oneself we find paths we'd never have found. There must be some happy medium but it eludes me still. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Aenimal, I truly think it is a blessing to be crescent, for no man is perfect and as our hearts grow with love and wisdom and we nurture the child within, an eclipse, an epiphany, a sprout of life is born and we find true light of happiness within the phenomenon! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aenimal, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was very pretty. I love the moon, stars, sunsets and sunrises, and the poems written about them. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes i think the moon laughs at all the lovesick fools under its spell, cabish? ........another lovesick puppy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
do you ever get the feeling that the moon is just laughing at all the lovesick ones, under its spell? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i found that so peaceful and descriptive.thankyou. i'm saving this, it was like a lullaby. soft and soothing. despite the feeling youre half of what you can be, you also have the knowledge that you've still yet to grow in to your 'full moon'! and i'm sure with this recognition, you'll soon be there. lots of love and hope,gemma xxxxx p.s with each reading of each of your poems, you already appear to me, complete as a poet. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This one follows Sophia - truly - had to let it breathe - it is just lovely - and I agree here with gemma - just open your eyes . . . xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I wish I were more like her but then I think maybe I am sometimes full but mostly half of what all I should be I can't believe I missed this sheesh, it's beautiful Bello...like you.  Mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
See that will teach me for reading to fast, it was an absolutely beautiful piece but here I thought it said you were mooning in here  |
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