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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Alone, in the twilight haze I gaze again at this woman. No longer a child, yet, small in her mind Healing an angled sword of insecurity and fear The lines of torment,concave, in tiny rivulets, Steer tears. Solace, she's never known, but reaches, strains As if to touch a lover, invisible to love. Distilled quiet, loneliness her enemy, Awakens terror in abysmal proportions. Tomarrow will not remain the same. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
issues of turmoil on the maturation front?a young woman living beyong her years? If she can find solace all the better...getting older is easy its the maturing that hurts  well put [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-26-2002 11:13 PM).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool poem is all i got... love it |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
May she find her peace. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Thanks you three. I guess this is a teaching an old dog new tricks kind of poem. |
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