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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-10-16 12:01 PM


Sit there in silence
until it becomes to late
for the voice
that you once heard
is forever gone
with the ever loving touch
that once was know
only to the one
that knows
where
you can hear
every caressing feel
of the voice that
all of you can
enjoy of me
for the real person
deep within that
will always know
until it is to late
for you to ever
hear the feel
the ever loving voice
once known
only to you
is me.


Bernie

PS: I miss you




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (10-16-2002 06:21 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-16 12:40 PM


I heard the silence. Sad but lovely words bslicker. This is the first time I have read your poetry. I will be sure to be watching for more of your poems.
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2 posted 2002-10-16 11:15 PM


bslicker,

This is very sad write. I hope that if it is true to life right now, your days become filled with happiness very soon.

                               Dawn

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3 posted 2002-10-16 11:17 PM


Sad write Bernie,..I do hope all is well.
~Heart-hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-10-17 02:27 AM


Thanks dance i don't write very much,,, just now and then.... glad you liked it.

Dawn....working on the happiness part.... think i have found it

Enchantress, Things are looking better, just finishing up with the paper work part tomorrow, and with the silence, i will be doing it, cause she hasn't told me not to.  So the sadness, will end then.
Thanks for reading and for the hugs

Bernie

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5 posted 2002-10-25 05:00 PM


Wow, all are very meaningful, touching works.  Great.
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6 posted 2002-10-25 05:08 PM


Not a happy write..but a good write...enjoyed
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7 posted 2002-10-25 08:21 PM


Oh Bernie, dear friend, I heard the silence, too. I'm so sorry that you are feeling this way. I hope very much, that you will  hear joy and happiness in your heart  VERY,  VERY  SOON. You are so kind and sweet, friend. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, too.


Love To All,
Ethel

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8 posted 2002-10-25 08:47 PM


enjoy
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9 posted 2002-10-25 08:51 PM


Bernie..after reading  the responses and yours back I am not sure about the "paperwork" you mention, but I know the feeling, it won't be long and I will be having to do the same...

enjoyed the read

M

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10 posted 2002-10-25 08:53 PM


straight from the heart.

as it should be, m'friend.

sincerity resonates.


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11 posted 2002-10-25 09:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bernard, you sound troubled, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope for your dear one to return soon as I wish nothing but happiness to fill your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-10-25 09:32 PM


Wow when someone needs you,,, you all here at pip show up.....

Thank you very much

Thank you Grif for reading.

Thanks Toe After 45 yrs of living..... sometimes things don't just happen the way you want them too.  But then one learns there is still happiness.....
Garysgirl..... thanks Ethel.  so true, so true

Vandana thank you for reading


Nakdthoughts..... sorry to hear that,  but yep once the silence to been there and still no response, then it is time.

Serenity  oh thank you friend,, don't be such a stranger... by the way you thought me this style.. and your right it was from the heart.


Mistleoe Thanks for reading and all your repies.......  You truely up lift the everyone just when they need it..

Once again ty  PiP...

Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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13 posted 2002-10-28 08:00 AM


Very touching, I think I saw your soul!  Sorry that you are going through this.
bslicker
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14 posted 2002-10-28 08:06 AM


Thank you Grif.
I think we all write a little from the soul at times...


Thanks again
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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15 posted 2002-10-28 09:45 AM


Well, you must more than others...
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16 posted 2002-10-29 01:35 AM


geez...just when I'd stopped crying too....wow!
bslicker
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17 posted 2002-10-29 09:28 AM


passing shadows


Thank you for reading

Bernie





A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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