Open Poetry #23 |
Hope, and Faith |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope, and Faith I shift and sift the sands of time solemnly, in my mind and weigh the say of daily pray wondering if I'll make the climb too much lost on love long spent and too soon to have reached content though softest croon lies deep in throat it's caught, this note, it hardly floats I can't sing for solace to bring ~ but the rains, they come again ~ fleeting, albeit, the sad gray days so I sift and shift the moments away in rhyme of time a sip of wine and look forward to what might be ~ for hope, you see… carries me… ~ the moment will pass, while looking glass glazes o'er the truth of sure… and I gather in then blot up these spilled dreams of a loving cup but drips and drops are left behind ~ sweeter fallen than in my mind and curse not I the roads traversed for they have all well rehearsed me to where I shall stage my written page for the war's been waged and gone is the rage… and gone, too, the grief lacking, tho, a sense of relief ~ but hope, you see, carries me…~ and faith… that I shall find the best that's yet to be e'en if told for now my dreams are naught but fallacy I shall dream my dreams [though some regret] anyway, and believe in the belief that come what may this striving gives goal to find the shoal that shall harbor me as my dreams foresee… for hope, and faith, they carry me. Circa 02.11.01 Revised 11.26.02 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-26-2002 05:04 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the oh so lovely poem...like the beautiful picture...is classic Sunshine allowing us to touch the warm. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is beautiful beyond words, both the poem and the picture. I'm keeping these, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Without hope or faith it would be very difficult to carry on. So enjoyed your inspiring poem. Deb |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You already know I'm going to say this is quite lovely. When one fails to trust in self, they fail to shine. Shine on, Karilea The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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