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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-11-26 12:06 PM

The light that once shined
from my fair Etoiles' being
has flickered and died

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-26 12:12 PM

nothing truly dies but is transformed...
but we can truly miss the form it once was

question becomes can we learn to see the new form and accept it as well?

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-11-26 12:15 PM

Yes......done

Thanks Ron

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-11-26 12:16 PM

wranx
The poem stands, enjoyed.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-11-26 12:25 PM

What can i say, brief or epic, your words as touching as always.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-11-26 06:45 PM

why does soemthing that felt so nice, have
to be permanently extinguished especially
if the parting was sweet, or was it?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-11-26 07:18 PM

Always impressed with the clean target and the precision of the emotion. Excellent.
ThisDiamond

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-11-26 07:45 PM

Whenever I read a reply by Cpat, I wish I had written it! ---BTW Ed, that goes for many of your poems as well!

Linda

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-11-26 10:04 PM

Never say goodbye
if only light brings solace
stave the dark of night

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-11-27 02:45 AM

I love your poetry. Even the little verses that you write are packed with thought and truth.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-11-27 04:44 PM

enjoyed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-11-27 04:51 PM

Even when
I close my eyes
the light that was
you
burns
against my lids.

Well done poet sir.
~Hugs & understanding~

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