Open Poetry #23 |
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Just a Shoulder to Lean On |
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Ladycat![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX ![]() |
Where are you? What are you doing? When I need just a shoulder to lean on Tears rolling Can't stop shaking For a shoulder to lean on Head starts to hurt Room starts to spin For your shoulder to lean on I think of days that I laid there holding you You holding me Head on shoulder fast asleep There you are looking down on me While I still cry Your shoulder wet but made to hold more I still lie for you I still die for you On your shoulder I cry for you But do you hear But do you feel Like just a shoulder to cry on Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Ladycat, nice to read your work, very nicely done indeed. Your words sound as if you need more love than a shoulder to lean on, at times too much weight can be put upon a shoulder, with it responsabilities, some can carry the weight, others not, tears fall, but as a storm comes, a day of bright and new often follows, filled with new hope and beginnings; seek your shoulder, but look further down to the hand below to hold and share. Enjoyed the read, till next time. Sincerely Rick |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Ladycat - Nice seeing you here... ![]() This piece sounds like you need a hug. So - Consider yourself hugged... ![]() |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I second the motion...many warm hugs to you. You captured some very real feelings with your poetry. Thanks. Warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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