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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-11-26 02:11 AM

moon's translucent skin
eve tides invisible veil
a new sun rises
light years away
fading blue flames and embers
a sunrise escapes

long, last sigh of night
a dream reclines in repose
sun slips into place
a parchment moon
writes through smoke-filled clouds
and stained glass windows

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-11-26 09:55 AM

KoKo~

'a dream reclines in repose
sun slips into place
a parchment moon'

This entire piece is creatively imaginative~
Absolutely B E A U T I F U L ~

*Huglets* and a Happy Thanksgiving to you sweet lady~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-26 11:54 AM

I enjoyed the fine imagery in this, Cheryl.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-11-26 11:59 AM

enjoyed

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-11-26 06:33 PM

such a feeling....a dream reclining in
repose..

nicely done Cher....Aloha

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-11-26 09:54 PM

the sun is swallowed
by the the hungry moon
nighttime invades
as winter comes soon

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-27 12:00 PM

(smiles) And the moon writes a villanelle to the sun in response to the warm affection he offers her! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love the syzygy of magic you weave in your words, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

7 posted 2002-11-27 12:59 PM

CSKpoet~ Beautiful pictures you have written with your words.
That time of day/night when both moon and sun blend together and "dreams recline in repose" bringing days and nights filled with new hopes & dreams...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-27-2002 01:00 AM).]

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