Open Poetry #23 |
Tastes Of Savory |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the sweet breath of evening Contemplate bears receiving In these quivered emotions Sets the dance of devotions By the bluest of midnight In acceptance of far sight Well the thought painted eyes Where acrylic dream dries And the hand cupped to carry In kind offer kept cherry In the think of the moon Sweet remembers still swoon To the dark and the ebbing Breath of gold beaded webbing Well before and again In the background ‘til then In the sweet breath of evening Would the night so deceiving Bring again of your kiss Such impetuous bliss Remembered as tingling that tasted like this Copyright Kkh 11/25/02 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So...what was it ??? A Mountain Dew or a Sprite....oooops...wait! This was about something to do with the taste of a lover's kiss...or somethin like that..?? Beautifully done K. very nice thoughts... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
aw...don't believe Magnus asked that....it was SHINE all the way...moonshine that is, in her lover's eyes...hee, hee. Lovely write my friend... jwesley |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I completely enjoyed the sensual quality of this piece and the kiss, especially. VERY nice work! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write! Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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