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The Bing Bong Man
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The Bing Bong Man |
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dan wood Junior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 15 |
The Bing Bong Man It only seems like yesterday that whilst eating a cake on a sunny day I was amazed to meet a man with green feet, who pulled out my hair then ran away! In shock and despair I picked up my hair and followed the man who gave me a scare Through rivers of slime for quite a long time, over a mountain and straight through a fountain! After 96 days he altered his ways and started to walk on sandals of chalk Then after a while with a carefree smile he made like a mole and ran down a hole! I followed some more down a path to a door, which was locked from within with a key made of skin After knocking 3 times I was pelted with limes through a whole in the roof (1 knocked out my tooth!) “How dare you” I screamed, then slowly it seemed the skin key was turned my temper still burned The door came open and the only words spoken were “Give me some ham, I’m the Bing Bong man” |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lots of fun visuals here Dan! Thanks for the smiles, I enjoyed this! Welcome to Passions ...  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (standing ovation) OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS!!! You poor thing, maybe if you treat him to some honey baked ham he will be most impressed and go off to bing-bong someone else, hehehe! This is so incredibly novel, sweet friend, you are amazing, into my library this timeless classic goes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Very interesting novel style. Enjoyed. God bless! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
What a hoot! Loved this. I posted one called "Damned Dan" a while back. It was a similar type, but yours is better. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dan, this is cute. I like the way you rhymed within the lines. If there's a technical word for that, I don't know what it is. Anyway, I like the style. Thanks for sharing your poem with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Welcome dan wood! I knew a Dan wood. nice guy too. but I digress....You do paint a lot of images. Cool poem. |
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