Open Poetry #23 |
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Silence |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn ![]() |
You are eloquent In your silence In didactic diatribe I hear our eulogy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...m'yeti... don't know what else to say but that. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful and simple. Was hoping you'd post tonight. I hope my reply to yesterday's poem made some sort of sense. Your words hit close to home sometimes. I just hope you find your peace as I search for my own. Good luck. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Still sitting here, silenced myself. Repeating your lines and sighing. *Peace. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks, all Aenimal, I am at peace, have been for quite a while. And yes, you did make sense. Thank you for the concern. Ed Alicia, Shhhhhh [This message has been edited by wranx (11-25-2002 12:58 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes it speaks harsh words at times... silence that is.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Silence is consent...(Sir Thomas More) ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Insert whisper here. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I truly appreciate the beauty of this write. EA |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You say much with few words here, Wranx. Corinne |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh dear wranx, so much, with so little. ![]() And okay, I've been dying to say this ever since you posted your pic. You look so much like my brother Richard, it's scarey. ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
shattering the silence love will come again to the unlocked heart |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Powerfully packed in such a small package of thoughtful silence... Well done.. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so painful for me to read...hope you dont mind but it made me think of how silence makes me feel...helen |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my goodness. The last line got me! Very well done....enjoyed and read several times. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Cuts to the heart...excellence in concentrate. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx You are a wordsmith, enjoyed. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
My goodness, but this is wonderful! Each of the posts above are glowing--and rightly so. Bravo! |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wow wonderful...simply wonderful.. -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Pain. |
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