Open Poetry #23 |
Silence |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You are eloquent In your silence In didactic diatribe I hear our eulogy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...m'yeti... don't know what else to say but that. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful and simple. Was hoping you'd post tonight. I hope my reply to yesterday's poem made some sort of sense. Your words hit close to home sometimes. I just hope you find your peace as I search for my own. Good luck. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Still sitting here, silenced myself. Repeating your lines and sighing. *Peace. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks, all Aenimal, I am at peace, have been for quite a while. And yes, you did make sense. Thank you for the concern. Ed Alicia, Shhhhhh [This message has been edited by wranx (11-25-2002 12:58 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes it speaks harsh words at times... silence that is.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Silence is consent...(Sir Thomas More) ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Insert whisper here. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I truly appreciate the beauty of this write. EA |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You say much with few words here, Wranx. Corinne |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh dear wranx, so much, with so little. And okay, I've been dying to say this ever since you posted your pic. You look so much like my brother Richard, it's scarey. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
shattering the silence love will come again to the unlocked heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Powerfully packed in such a small package of thoughtful silence... Well done.. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so painful for me to read...hope you dont mind but it made me think of how silence makes me feel...helen |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my goodness. The last line got me! Very well done....enjoyed and read several times. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Cuts to the heart...excellence in concentrate. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx You are a wordsmith, enjoyed. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
My goodness, but this is wonderful! Each of the posts above are glowing--and rightly so. Bravo! |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wow wonderful...simply wonderful.. -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Pain. |
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