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Open Poetry #23

a moment of clarity

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-11-23 04:26 PM

while seeking in life
a moment of clarity
I found His awesome truth

©November 23, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Jamie Dawg
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 35

1 posted 2002-11-23 04:33 PM

i tink this is a sentiment many people can agree with. very simply put, but the crystal clarity of the form you have chosen adds strength to the message. tanks for sharing man!

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

2 posted 2002-11-23 04:59 PM

wow. there was so much power in these few words.

nicely done.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-23 06:29 PM

Virginia, Whispering....this is almost sacred, and definitely beautiful....

Thanks for sharing it, it is lovely.

Warm Regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-11-23 06:38 PM

Perfectly beautiful Virginia.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-11-24 09:29 PM

gonna pass this to my son...he will just love it...as did I...

jwesley

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