Sands Of Evermore (Terza Rima for Janet Marie and Mark.)

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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-11-23 10:43 AM

Sands Of Evermore {Terza Rima}

Her hearts wish was to someday see the sea
behold, cherished dreams can not be denied.
There her soft soul would finally fly free.

Within special bonding, she did confide.
She wanted held in its magical spell,
to feel the surf rushing in with the tide.

He took her to where peacefulness does dwell
she, mesmerized in tranquilities view
dancing in starlight, among oceans swell.

Dreams realized in sunsets golden hue
walk of memories upon the shore
in friendships sharing, devotion of two.

In mystical moments where spirits soar,
held in reality, for evermore.

{for Janet, who realized her dreams,
and Mark,who helped make them come true.
May the memories never fade. Hugs!}

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you 'hear' "me"?

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-23-2002 11:08 AM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-23 10:45 AM

verry nice.. very nice indeed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-11-23 11:10 AM

Within special bonding, she did confide.
She wanted held in its magical spell,
to feel the surf rushing in with the tide.

I can hear the sighs and soft fluttering of moth wings in happy flight....this is wonderful. I'm so glad I'm a nag for "more, please..."

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2002-11-23 11:19 AM

Excellent write! you really are a gentle spirit.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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4 posted 2002-11-23 12:45 PM

Within special bonding, she did confide.
She wanted held in its magical spell,
to feel the surf rushing in with the tide.

He took her to where peacefulness does dwell
she, mesmerized in tranquilities view
dancing in starlight, among oceans swell.

Dreams realized in sunsets golden hue
walk of memories upon the shore
in friendships sharing, devotion of two.
=========================================

Well, how could I not love this!!

Thank you so much Donna, for this very lovely gifting of inspiration and verse, I am both touched and impressed..love the rhyme scheme of this (hey Nan..extra credit here ok?)

and that pic is very familiar LOL
(me feels the "sunshine" ) *wink*
very cool....thanks girlie...your replies to my poems since my visit have been so sweet and I know you understand how powerful of an impression the ocean left on me.
Thank you for sharing in my celebration of a life long dream realized thru Mark's promise kept. It was so worth the wait!!

*thank you MC...
for all the hues of blue...for all the memories.*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-11-23 01:47 PM

Donna, I know you don't mind if I shed a few tears reading this one...
One...because of the beauty in this write..
Two...for Janet's dream come true.
~Hugs sweet poetess~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-23 07:58 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and God Bless Janet and Mark, who I wish both the most wonderful happiness forever and ever as I knew their dreams would come true, yay! (kiss on cheek) You are such a wonderful and giving friend, sweet friend, God Bless You, this also brought a huge smile to my face, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-11-23 08:04 PM

the silly moth forgot to put this in me treasure chest....
got it now

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

8 posted 2002-11-23 10:54 PM

Say, this is beautiful. Thank you.

etoodog

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

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my own state

9 posted 2002-11-23 11:19 PM

Reading a little romaticism does me well from time to time..good going

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

10 posted 2002-11-23 11:27 PM

Those things some take for granted.....so important. A kindness you should pay the event tribute, a kindness on Marks part and a blessing that the very worthy Janet Marie's wish fulfilled.

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