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Open Poetry #23

timezones

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-11-22 04:41 PM

one more sunset
breaks over
the atlantic,
colors pour down
like emotions
running off
this longing heart,
and i sit
on these timeless rocks
and realize
that this timezone
between us
erases any
romantic illusion
or bittersweet consolation
of even
a sychonized view
tonight

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-22 04:58 PM

Oh my! I would bet there are millions of people on the computer could relate to this, with time zones being a huge factor in their lives, very, very well done.

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-11-22 05:03 PM

thanks,
online romance/intrigue makes for great writing, doesnt it?

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-22 09:05 PM

This is beautifully done. Your images and phrasing are well done. Thanks KJ
(I did a longer piece on how those we meet on the net go away, but it is not so exquisitely worded...smile)

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-11-22 09:47 PM

yes, they do come and go , like we do too,
but theres always another train pulling into
the station isnt there?
well something like that

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