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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2002-11-22 04:41 PM




one more sunset
breaks over
the atlantic,
colors pour down
like emotions
running off
this longing heart,
and i sit
on these timeless rocks
and realize
that this timezone
between us
erases any
romantic illusion
or bittersweet consolation
of even
a sychonized view
tonight


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1 posted 2002-11-22 04:58 PM


Oh my!  I would bet there are millions of people on the computer could relate to this, with time zones being a huge factor in their lives, very, very well done.

                
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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2 posted 2002-11-22 05:03 PM




thanks,
online romance/intrigue makes for great writing, doesnt it?

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
3 posted 2002-11-22 09:05 PM


This is beautifully done.  Your images and phrasing are well done.  Thanks  KJ
  (I did a longer piece on how those we meet on the net go away, but it is not so exquisitely worded...smile)

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
4 posted 2002-11-22 09:47 PM




yes, they do come and go , like we do too,
but theres always another train pulling into
the station isnt there?
well something like that

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