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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-22 01:20 PM



Warm Fall

where was I
before you came?
lost
circling down
slippery loneliness
then I fell
into tenderness
hands that wrap
and comfort
did I ever feel
this way
before you
rescued me
discovering that
forever feels
oh so warm

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
1 posted 2002-11-22 01:24 PM


This is beautiful....

Hope all is as well as it sounds...

~~ Connie ~~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-11-22 01:27 PM


z...life IS good !!!  e mail me...h
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3 posted 2002-11-22 03:52 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I believe that is the most gorgeous magic of love as its afterglow can always be felt and the dreams we have of it is like a harbinger of the beauty to come! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
4 posted 2002-11-23 07:02 PM


Helen when a heart like yours is around there
is always warmth.
Thomas

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-11-23 08:26 PM


helen - lost in tenderness, not a bad place to be...

BC

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
6 posted 2002-11-24 07:27 AM


Nothing feels quite as good as coming in from the cold--lovely!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

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