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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-11-22 04:49 AM


Finis

Am I
too stupid
to know
that she
already broke
up with me a
long time
ago?

Is
she
just
stringing
me on?

She doesn't
want me but
she doesn't
want me
gone.

JamesLee
November21
2002
JustSome
Thoughts.



© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-11-22 11:53 AM


reminds me of the old sayin...
"having her cake and eating it too"
youre not stupid SBJ...but sometimes love makes us act like we are.
hugs
jm

I'm not crazy, I'm just a little unwell
I know right now you cant tell
but stay awhile, maybe then you'll see
a different side of me

MB20

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2 posted 2002-11-22 03:18 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as your writes have been downbeat lately! (sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-11-22 04:43 PM


The most difficult part of the not see...is the battle inside ourselves.
Follow your own star...it shines brightly.
A lesson I have learned.
ThisDiamond

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By the sea
4 posted 2002-11-22 05:04 PM


James, this is one of your best, I believe.  

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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