A Fragile Seed - repost from Poetic Haven

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Munda
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0 posted 2002-10-15 05:42 PM

A Fragile Seed

A fragile seed was planted in the garden of my heart,
A wall was build around it for I thought that would be smart.
The gardener had one quick look and said; "This wall must go,
Let sunshine fall upon you and some rain to let you grow."
And nurtured by his gentle hands this seed soon grew to be
A flower of significance, her name is Love you see.
I thank you dearest gardener for keeping out the weed,
But most of all I thank you for the planting of this seed.

Munda

[This message has been edited by Nan (10-17-2002 06:25 PM).]

WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-10-15 05:58 PM

Absolutely lovely! A very gentle write.

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-10-15 06:55 PM

I liked this so much. Creative and wise.

Pat

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Balladeer

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3 posted 2002-10-16 08:38 PM

munda, thisis very beautiful writing, sincere and as delicate as the flowers you portray...wonderful writing.

Now get back to the top where you belong!!

Sunshine

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4 posted 2002-10-16 09:53 PM

Munda...just one small nit...should "grow" be "grew"?

All I really know, is that this is growing on me!

DawnG

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5 posted 2002-10-16 11:10 PM

Munda,

I absolutely adore this poem. Reading this poem made me think of so many people. I miss you dear friend. Hope to catch up with you again soon.

Dawn

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6 posted 2002-10-16 11:24 PM

(smiles) Oh Munda, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You and may the seed of life always grow in your heart and be nurtured with peace! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Munda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

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7 posted 2002-10-17 02:27 AM

Munda, I love this poem so much. I can tell that a lot of seeds of love are growing in your heart. This was wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Kit McCallum

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8 posted 2002-10-17 11:34 AM

This is absolutely delightful, Munda. What a lovely, rhythmic piece, with such wonderful wisdom and description. Very much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Munda
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9 posted 2002-10-17 03:24 PM

Thank you all so kindly for your wonderful replies.

Thanks Sunshine. I can't believe I missed that!

I've asked Nan to edit it for me.

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2002-10-17 03:33 PM

Absolutely beautiful writing Munda. Hugs.

Auguste

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11 posted 2002-10-17 05:09 PM

Beautifully written and with much wisdom.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Nan

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12 posted 2002-10-17 06:28 PM

Edit? What edit?... Ok - Tis done

This is a wonderful poem, Munda - The seed of love yields the most splendid of all gardens...Very nice, m'friend..

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