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Our Song Is Over
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Our Song Is Over |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Our Song Is Over Unlikely surrounds another sundown's sunrise With an empty chance of hope seen through my eyes Our song is over before it ever got to play Certainty vanished when the stars took hold Waiting here for something is growing old And, somehow, I'm caught in tomorrow's escape... For, it was never mine to really claim I believed in sacred when you welcomed the change I'm just on the edge of falling apart Our song is over in the arms of long gone I bet it would have been a pretty song But, I'm left here with hesitation at heart... Something I never dreamed you ever do Just where was the path that I lost you I'm here still in your shadow alone A fall far from grace I lost my place Yet, time and time again I find your face The leap to scared hits me harder then stones... Faith went right by and forgot to touch me Fate stole the sanity I once believed Agony haunts a world gone bad Our song is over and never was heard Would've given anything to listen to just one word Could've been the lyrics of my life I never had... Laughter tarnished right along with these tears The days plague my most propounding fears I'm proof of what the rain surely brings Perhaps a melody you'll someday find A tune you'll create to make all mine For, our song is over before we even got to sing... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) I can sense such sadness in your words, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to the now and if it does know He has a plan for us all for He conducts the grandest symphonies of life and you will find that soprano song of joy sung from deep inside you shared in accord with a true love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
This was a very sad and heartfelt write filled with longing, loss, love and regret. If true to life then give yourself time, lots of time. Hugs to you my friend, very nicely penned. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
first a note to Noah...very nicely worded, you are a love  Saunni, If this is a current situation at least know this. You have a great gift for writing poetry and expressing feelings quite well. This and the last poem of yours are sad but, part of life. Thank you for sharing. They are so well done. Again, don't know if you are just creating (as I often do) but most likely these are your feelings... and writing is one the most theraputic ways to heal, as is time. Giving you big hugs, Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, I thought it was an alto voice? Saundra, Bless you dear girl. I hope all is well. It seems much sorrow has touched your life and I wish you joy.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It is time for a new song to begin, for songs never end, just the singers. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
He was singing offkey anyway I think it sounds like time to find a new partner for that perfect duet and awaken the whole world with your harmony |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd girl! you are so good at sad |
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