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Open Poetry #23

Last Breathe

Krystopher Morris
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry

0 posted 2002-11-20 09:22 PM

Last Breath
By:Krystopher Morris
I hold you tightly,
Scared, Lost.
Your cold eyes stare into mine,
Lifeless, Sacred.

A true angel that you were,
Fallen into an evil curve.
You should have held on,
So much love wasted.

So beautiful,
A life wasted.
You drew in the lifeless breath,
And blew it out realeasing that angelic soul.

So missed, So loved.
Don't forget in lives to come,
The life you changed,
The life I call mine.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

1 posted 2002-11-21 05:01 AM

Ah, the hurt and price of consequences for the choices of another--insightful read!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2002-11-21 07:06 AM

Very much enjoyed. quite haunting, yet full of love.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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