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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-20 02:51 AM


Near The End

I'm thinking about breaking up with her.
I don't really want to but I imagine I will
unless some changes are made I've had my fill.
She never seems to have the time for me.
It's getting near the end.
She has disappointed me too many times.
I really don't wish to offend.
But it is getting near the end.
My patience is wearing rather thin.
I find myself looking around for someone else.
It's very near the end.

JamesLee
November18
2002

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-11-20 03:06 AM


James, I think you should do what you feel is right. Being a woman, and being told a time or two by men exactly what you've written here, this is hard for me to say, but maybe it's time for a change. Good luck. Be happy.
majnu
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2 posted 2002-11-20 11:26 AM


an eloquent problem statement. remember treadmills don't get you anywhere.

-majnu
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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-20 11:37 AM



Perhaps by this writing of your feelings, you may now have the clarity of thought to make the decision that is right for you.

~ May your inner wisdom always guide you

Earth Angel

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4 posted 2002-11-20 11:46 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Follow your heart and do whatever is best for you and her, sweet friend, you have a very loving heart and it saddens me to see you hurt but I know you will make the right decision! (sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-11-20 04:33 PM


Hello James

I guess when you start looking elsewhere then that is a sure sign the end the relationship.  I hope you find the love and happiness you deserve.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-20 07:30 PM


James, this is so sad.  My heart goes out to you because you are feeling this way. I hope that you will do what's best for you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Robert Adamson
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7 posted 2002-11-20 09:40 PM


I like how you can state finality with a certain eternal breeze.

etoodog

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8 posted 2002-11-20 09:59 PM


enjoyed
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