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Watching The Stars............(part 3 of my little Japanese verses)
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Watching The Stars............(part 3 of my little Japanese verses) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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With feet in the sand We lie down on the blanket While watching the stars [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-20-2002 10:06 AM).] |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Yay! I love this, Ethel! keep it up aloha and hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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moonflower Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 37magical land of make-believe |
i love this..haiku is so fun isnt it?..  inside every soul there is music...let the music play |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
make sure the tise doesn't get you ( smiling) sounds like a nice place to be... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
sweet little write! ThisDiamond |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
HMMM... Somehow Ethel, I doubt you see many stars once the blanket is unfolded!! Just teasing....very well written!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very sweet little Haiku... well done, Ethel  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cheryl...... Thank you for reading and replying. I'm glad that you like them. Valerie...... Yeah, these little haiku's really are fun !I like them. Thanks for replying. Capt...... I'll be real careful!! HeeHee!! Yeah, the beaches and water around here are beautiful. Thanks for your reply. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen.... Thanks for reading and for your sweet reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio.... Shame on you!!! HaHa!! Thanks for reading and for your reply. I'm glad you liked it. Lyra.... Thanks for reading and replying. I appreciate it, little Chippymunk. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-19-2002 06:54 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
simple pleasures in life so sweetly written about |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Lovely.Just proof that you don't have to write a book to describe a tree. paladin |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lie under the blanket was the key here, and the show was awesome....thanx Ethel! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Well, you really have outdone yourself with these. They are so good; I just love them. Hugs and Brava ... Marti |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, So good to see you writing these. And, seeing you continually branching out in other forms of writing. You do it well.  Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool poem for the one yuh love |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
inkedgoddess.... Thanks very much for reading and for your reply. I really appreciate your comments. Paladin..... Thank you for your reply. I'm really glad that you liked this little haiku. Barry..... Now! Now! HeeHee!!......I said, "We lie down on the blanket", not "under" it. HaHa!! Thanks for reading and for your reply. Marti..... Thank you so much. I really appreciate you saying that. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat....... Thank you so much for reading my little poem. I really do appreciate your comments, too. Walt..... Thanks for reading my poem and for your reply. I'm glad that you liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) These are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous love for Gary is so heavenly and I knopw he will forever be blessed and happily will show you loves destiny! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i want to put this next to a picture of half moon bay on a clear night. -majnu |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, Thanks so much for reading my little poem. Your replies are always so sweet. I really appreciate you, Noah. You are a good friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Majnu, thank you very much for reading and replying. I appreciate your comment. "Love makes the world go around" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very, very fine senyru Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are really getting very good at writing these short Japanese verses! ~ may you continue to make such memorable memories! Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, Thanks so much for reading and replying to my little Japanese verse. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, thank you so much. I love the little verses that you and Marti, and the rest here, write so well, that I decided to try it. I got the "seies" idea from Mark and others who write the continuing things. "Love makes the world go around" |
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