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The Dim
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The Dim |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I see the dim of light again, the slow descent of bright, to pale. The fade away of what surrounds clear perception now does fail, all is mute as color bleached white before my longing eyes, drains from me all artistry and imagination slowly dies. WhiteRose 11/16/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The seasons of the heart will grow and fade, and not ever to dim...for they are made of inner light. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose Well done, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Anne, Amazing how one can ~see the dim~ while still enlightening others. That is a real gift. Love your poetry. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely enlightening write, Anne... I have often seen the dim... and I don't like it!  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Anne, I too know this feeling ever too well, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and hope now this feeling has diminished and your heart is splashed in rainbows! (sigh) God less You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
even in the dim the poet will find poetry, just as you have. nothing especially remarkable to me in this but its just complete and satisfying to the reader. -majnu |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your light within, May brighten and dim But it will never die You have a gentle soul and you feel the slings and arrows of life and living more than most people. This may drain the color from your cheeks of rose or may cause your shining light to dim--but these are but passing phases which give you time to regroup and recharge. ~ sending you warm angel hugs EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
TD, thanks so much, I pray the inner light will blast upon my sight just now. Thank you Sy, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you Pat, for reading, and for the much appreciated hugs. Lyra, thank you dear sweet lady, I too am not fond of the dim at all. Noah, thank you so much dear friend, I am slowly walking to the light at the end of the tunnel. As always, your words touch me. majnu, my dearest friend, thanks so much for reading. I know it's not remarkable, but I'm glad it touched you in a small way. Linda, thanks so much for the warm hugs. They are most appreciated just now. This feeling of lifes slings and arrows more so than others, it is a curse that comes with the gift, so I live with it, and embrace it, I just wish it didn't hurt so much at times. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not for long, my friend, never for long! Your strength is enduring! |
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