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Open Poetry #23

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Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

0 posted 2002-10-15 02:00 PM

sky
clouds
rain
drips
f
  a
    l
      l
        s
dive bombs
kamikaze drops
FURRY on grounded tagets

earth absorbing
blows dealt
irrigation
evaporation
irritation
return to sender
exodus in
mass migration

[This message has been edited by Effigy (10-15-2002 04:00 PM).]

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2002-10-15 02:24 PM

Excellent descrition of this weather cycle!

Enjoyed Effigy!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-15 02:58 PM

Awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Quantum Poet
New Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 6

3 posted 2002-10-15 03:48 PM

Gooooooddddd Stuff!
I enjoyed your use of shape...

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2002-10-15 03:54 PM

return to sender
exodus in
mass migration

Effigy, great poem, those three lines especially. These are words of quiet sadness.

El riesgo vive siempre!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-03 03:56 AM

you are gifted

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