Open Poetry #23 |
The Old Book |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A book of old upon the hearth in wait of eyes to taste the words upon the tell of time in chime as then the hour is late and dreams have come to sleep in nightly dwell. The thoughts of one, of pen and flowing ink now dry in lasting words of blackened write. A style which takes the mind to twisted think no matter how you ponder it so slight. Can not a word be writ in claim of love? Without the shroud, be heard by all to hear. As soft and shear the whitest silken glove where not they’ll shed one single crystal tear. As leaves are blown and limbs are made to bend a gasp shall come upon the page’s end. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - what stunning words. I like this very much... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful dear Magnus. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Wonderfully written. A very enjoyable read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, this made me think of Elvis Costello's "Every Day I Write The Book", where you leave each days end with a smile of love and every day a sequel of a love tale is born! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
...and my muse she sits me well indeed, oh my muse she sits me well and weave oh weave my muse she does and weaves, and sieves, and leaves her spell.... [This message has been edited by Lady In White (11-18-2002 11:21 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is stunning, Barry... ~ hugs and acorns Lyra |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for the pleasure of reading it Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful write... both the style and word choices fit the message... I enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I savored the flavor of your words--the taste 'twas divine.... EA |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"As leaves are blown and limbs are made to bend a gasp shall come upon the page’s end." Applause!!! "I am a sky where spirits live. |
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