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Two Hearts, One Dream
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Two Hearts, One Dream |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * Lay me softly in the meadow And please stay with me awhile Shower me with your sweet kisses And let me trace around your smile Roll me over in the clover As we frolic in the sun Let me give myself to you For it's my heart you have won Run with me through the valley Beneath the sky so blue My days are always perfect When I spend them loving you Whisper to me sweet nothings Become the keeper of my heart Two souls have been united And will never ever part Our two hearts share a dream 'tho we sing with just one voice I love you without effort I love you simply by choice I am in motion |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"Our two hearts share a dream 'tho we sing with just one voice I love you without effort I love you simply by choice" Sue, I love the whole poem, but this ending stood out to me....so true for couples who are really in love. I love the way you put the pictures in with your poems. I'll be glad when I learn to do that. It really adds to the words. Thanks so much for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOPS...forgot to keep it. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"I love simply by choice." Simply a wonderful choice of phrasing...I enjoyed this poem, Sue. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, I honestly believe you are the queen of romantic love poems. What a gem this is. '... Our two hearts share a dream 'tho we sing with just one voice I love you without effort I love you simply by choice ...' Words to melt the coolest heart. The picture is fascinating. I don't remember seeing this one. I love the details in it. Hugs, Marti |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue...you are the queen of romance! This is one awesome write sweet poetess. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, I honestly believe you are the queen of romantic love poems. What a gem this is. '... Our two hearts share a dream 'tho we sing with just one voice I love you without effort I love you simply by choice ...' Words to melt the coolest heart. The picture is fascinating. I don't remember seeing this one. I love the details in it. Hugs, Marti |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so free and light, Sue... I love the carefree feel of it  ~ hugs from a loving chipmunkLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and to love by free-will is the happiest feeling of all! (kiss onn cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, may true love always sing in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you weave words of deep romance and love - thanks so for all you write - Paul |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This poem is simply ~precious~! Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
This sounds close to a love story that I was in the middle of telling. *sigh* Its time to uncap our pen again I think. I enjoyed this. It inspires me to begin again. Lovely... Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
Pardon me for peeking again, but I begin to think I recognized the painting, and when I noticed the name on the bottom of the painting, I realized I have seen it before. Josephine Wall has some breathtaking artwork, and you have done a wonderful job with this. Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An absolute pleasure to read...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~ Another beautiful touching poem from you. This flows so smooth, like a summer breeze...Paul |
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