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Measuring Love
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Measuring Love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A pen of blackened tip upon the page to sweep the heart into ethereal bliss. A quill of old born of a sprightly sage as fingers trace the lips before a kiss. When I look to the starry nighttime sky and beams reflect the hues of hazel soft. A passing thought of then brings forth a sigh as steps now lead the way to hay filled loft. Were not the night to come and kiss the dusk before the light now wanes and falls to rest. A love would wait to feed the bowl filled lust and life should live each moment for the best. As souls are born to mate and bring to bear True love the gauge by which two hearts should share. You asked for it.....you got it....Toyota!!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Beautiful love poem! I love it! Thank you forthis romantic treasure. I love poems about lobe Splendod! Liz |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry I'm sure you knew I'd love this one and I loved the sense of humour at the end. I hope you are well. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this is cute. I was reading a very romatic love poem...then came to your funny ending!! I enjoyed it, Barry. Thanks "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - very nice, very nice. A hay filled loft, now why didn't I think of that? BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Barry!! Love the ending! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
brilliant. the rhyme really cinched it! -majnu |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry You silly man...this was such a beautiful love poem...but to a car??? What were you thinking?   |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, now I was completely suprised there, well, they certainly can handle the torque of any loose gravel, that's for sure! LOL! (smiles) This is cute, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Barry... and I loved the surprise ending!!!! Maybe you should send it to Toyota's advertising dept...  ~ late night chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now STOP that! [Stomping foot!] |
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