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A Sketch
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A Sketch |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
A Sketch The season extracts color from the landscape, leaving black and gray to dominate the winter of a northwest climate. Veins stick out from oak and maple, and from a distance, parks seem full of large, round bruises. I don't know why but I need sparse statement. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (11-18-2002 10:51 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I really enjoyed the vision through your words and I'm surprised no one else found this treasure yet. Take care.......Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (11-18-2002 07:26 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rmw, I really like the way you painted this picture with words. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Slowly, color extracts itself from the landscape, ============================ vivid image wrapped up in that line... in this whole succinct piece of images. you can have my share of winter.  well done poet sir. No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and from a distance, parks seem full of large, round bruises. I don't know why but I need sparse statement. ~*~ Much to be said for sparse... much |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
When the leaves fall and the trees begin to bare themselves, sparsity is apropos. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful weaving of images and thought... enjoyed! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thanks folks. This may be one of those where I will continue to prune until I'm left with nothing but "..sparse statement..". That's what goes with living in apple country. Smiling. Bob |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Interesting work here, Bob, especially the last line. Very good. Cor |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe i'll visit apple country...you know I'm in orange country right now... [This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-14-2002 02:36 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perhaps sparse statements....are the distillaton of truths... always enjoy... always. |
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