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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-11-18 05:49 PM

We Parted Yesterday

Walking on the promenade I pass
two lovers kissing romantically.
Making me painfully aware of a sweetheart
that simply walked away from me.
I begin to think of the tender
kisses we shared.
I ponder the posibility that
perhaps she never cared.
Life is funny that way.
I miss her desperately.
More today than yesterday.
Sad to say that we parted
yesterday.

JamesLee
November19
2002

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-11-18 06:22 PM

James - oh, I hope this is not true. Your words are heartfelt and my thoughts are with you if this be so. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-11-18 06:37 PM

could feel your sadness in remembering...
nicely done

M

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-18 11:34 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I too hope this didn't really happen, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs of comfort your way to console any loss you may have in your heart! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwaysn shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-11-19 12:58 PM

You wrote this beautifully, James... but I hope it isn't personal...
I remember this feeling after my first husband died...
the whole world seemed to be coupled off and I was lonely

~ hugs and acorns

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-11-19 01:07 AM

James, like everyone else, I sure do hope that this isn't personal. This poem really had a lot of feeling.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-11-19 04:15 AM

yeah, life is funny that way.

Kristine
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 92
Mahal Kita!!!

7 posted 2002-11-19 04:20 AM

Oh so sad

but beautifully written.

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