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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-11-18 03:48 AM


Energy so deep within.
Darkness so transparent
in an inner flame
of burning desires.

Explosive eruptions of mind travel
reaching the greatest universes
of unknown potential power
unleashing the dynamic whirlwind.

Magnetic storms of illumination
electrifying the skies of thought
in an ever awakening revival
of the your spirits northern lights.

In the vastness of inner space
a celestial vigor of infinite reflections
channeling the mind to new challenges
meditating within your peace of mind.

You have the ultimate power
to help make the biggest differences.
That will make us all thinkers
in words so golden
that they are crown jewels.

Thought: This was written in the faith that we all have the power to reach deep within us to tap into the dynamic life force that is our very existence.

D.Lester Young 11/18/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-11-18 06:31 PM


so very true:
"...we all have the power to reach deep within us to tap into the dynamic life force that is our very existence."

I am trying, although it isn't that easy. *s
M

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2002-11-18 10:19 PM


I look forward to contemplating your contemplations.  Keep them coming...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Miah
Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2002-11-18 10:25 PM


Very powerful.  It moved me.  Thanks for the enjoyable read.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2002-12-14 04:21 AM


your poetry stands by itself, but I do love the ending thoughts that you throw in
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