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Half a Song
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Half a Song |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Half a Song How long then did you look for me, Did you search, or feel, our poetry? Which always seemed but a part, Or did Wind whisper to your heart? comfort me as yet you guide this team of horses that will ride upon the skies of ever when for you shall hear the wind again unrest has been upon this plain until the find of you again, and then the reasons behind these past decades have begun in light, to fade as well to slip between blades of grass those places where our feet have passed now cloak me once more with you and scatter my dreams in your view then allowing one to catch the tear as slowly comes the release of fear to hold the heart that's long held you through all trials, tribulations, too to face again the wind's caress to know that strangeness is welcome, blessed to feel, but not, the care once there to hear again your voice on air... for in this epoch of the now of then I come willing to you again in better times that led to now I'll once again give you my vow to make all that is yours be blessed of kiss for in my shadows, you still exist... In tribute to a muse... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That one might taste the fruits of words written and shared. That one may become as much a part of all that is thought..or dared.. Such a grace this would be for a muse... As are these words to one...as you have written in tribute of.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"now cloak me once more with you and scatter my dreams in your view then allowing one to catch the tear as slowly comes the release of fear to hold the heart that's long held you through all trials, tribulations, too" ============================================= Dear Lady, You have indeed left me misty eyed this evening...how wonderful to see you here. A beautiful tribute to a muse. May you stay and continue to grace our pages. ~Hugs sweet poetess~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"As well to slip between blades of grass those places where our feet have passed" Love's journey shared by two hearts...You have served your muse well in this write Lady in White... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - this is a very beautiful poem. What I would give to be written to like this... I had to add to this reply for I have read this over and over again. Whomever your muse is, I want you to know that I'm very, very touched by your words... BC [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (11-17-2002 09:14 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
ahh sweet Lady, this is simply beautiful and a joy to read. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"now cloak me once more with you and scatter my dreams in your view" The entire poem was captivating, these lines, especially, spoke to me---enjoyed! "I am a sky where spirits live. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is exquisite. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooo beautifully expressed, Lady! Wonderful! |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
as I said to one other who astounded me, i rarely find words regarding that which effects me the most. i will keep this. -majnu |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, to return ones vow faithfully is the most golden gift one can ask for, as in each soul is but half a song whose median is closed in a joining heartbear! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely tribute to your muse, Lady in White... Its good to see you back here again  ~ hugs and acornsLyra |
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Shade Junior Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 10 |
I love this. Beautiful. Shade |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A+ and iwihwt  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
to face again the wind's caress to know that strangeness is welcome, blessed to feel, but not, the care once there to hear again your voice on air... for in this epoch of the now of then I come willing to you again in better times that led to now I'll once again give you my vow to make all that is yours be blessed of kiss for in my shadows, you still exist... =================================== thats some muse ya got there Lady. as always your words are laced with delicate threads of spun poetry. So very lovely poetess in white... yes..please stay... pen the other half of the song No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and the other half? I would think if the other was half as beautiful as this... the whole would be a masterpiece. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Could you write a fine poem such as this, for my muse?--Perhaps she will come back to me... Exquisite, dear Lady! EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady Exquisite! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
for in this epoch of the now of then I come willing to you again in better times that led to now I'll once again give you my vow .... and I give you my WOW... Regards, Sudhir |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
I AM AWED!~ This poem speaks from the heart, in utter contemplation... Truly golden. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anyone who knows me would agree that I hardly ever get speechless, but know I am.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all... each and every one of you please know...you exist in, and out of, my shadows... you make the dark comfortable, and bring in the warm... Thank you for reading. |
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