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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-17 07:29 PM



I was for a time lost, amid
the dark of shadow. Merely dust,
that floated with slight of
breeze across pavement. A dance
of chance, there amid the black.
I had little substance and was
at home, alone, with only that
which lives and breathes in air
and nothing more. Pure weightless
beings without shape or form, of
any norm, they fit with me. In
free flight of mind across space
and time with mere thought
enough to propel, to somewhere
not there, but a place in nowhere.
There are moments still, when I
become shaded and must again, flee
the confines of shadow with my
dance of freedom in particle of dust.
A ballerina of shaded air, filled
with the thoughts that move me.

WhiteRose 11/17/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-11-17 07:32 PM


This is so lovely, Anne... especially the imagery...
I think we are all particles of dust in the vast universe...
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Lady In White
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2 posted 2002-11-17 07:49 PM



Perhaps my eyes are
just tired,
or perhaps it is that
you have a gift,
but the words danced
and the sound of
this joined in...

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-11-17 09:32 PM


Thanks so much Lyra, your comments mean a lot to me.

Lady In White, Thank you for reading and for such a lovely response.

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