Open Poetry #23 |
The Maiden of High Mountain's Glen |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Long, long ago in sometime when, Far, far away in mountain’s glen, At spring’s first thaw was born a child, Sired by the gods in nature wild, With angel’s face and silken hair, Her soul as pure as alpine air, Raised by the stars, taught by the moon, From evils of the world immune, Of life’s perils unaware, Protected by great grizzly bear, From newborn babe to nubile child, In Shangri-La, in nature wild. One day into high mountain’s valley, Came forth a man in fortune’s sally, A man of strength with courage bold, Seeking treasures; mountain’s gold. Instead he found a beauty rare, With angel’s face and silken hair, A woman-child beyond compare, With soul as pure as alpine air. He took her gently in his arms, Wooed her with his manly charms, There in the mountains high above, Taught to her of mortal’s love. In her heart did maiden capture, Fulfillment in love’s total rapture, But then the man said he must go, Before the fall of winter’s snow, He left one day before the dawn, Without her knowing he had gone, Behind the maiden did remain, Within her heart, lanced mortal pain. It is said in mountains high, So high that one can touch the sky, The wind sounds oft as if were mortal, Calling out from heaven’s portal, A woman’s voice in sorrow’s pain, Singing out her sad refrain, Where have you gone my one true love? I’ll wait forever, here above. And if you gaze to mountain’s peak, You’ll see a vision if you seek, An angel’s face with silken hair, A maiden fair with beauty rare. /pip/Forum37/HTML/000294.html [This message has been edited by Tim (11-17-2002 06:55 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sound of a woman languishing can be forever haunting, as some of your poetry remains... forever haunting... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enchanting... Magical.... ..simply amazing... So much enjoyed..a keeper for sure! ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A lovely tale well told. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This has the beauty of old English poetry, Tim... I enjoyed it very much ~ hugs and grins Lyra |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wind bore lament of love lost...and heart broken...cold empty cries...hauntingly written... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Creative...James |
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