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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-11-17 04:41 PM

Cold dark night
Cold dark clouds rolls by
Cold november rain
falling down
Like a teardrop
I can hear voices
In my heart
You are calling my name
Cold november night
The stars so bright
Love remains the same
Cold november rain
With the pain
Inside my heart
You are not here
To hold my hand
And when I needed you
To keep me warm
And tender
Wanted you to comfort me
Cold november night
I feel lost and weak
Without you
beside me
Wanted your love so much
That you can comfort me
whole day and night
Cold november night
Thinking of you
holding me tight

[This message has been edited by vandana (11-17-2002 04:43 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-11-17 04:48 PM

Great Job Vandana....and this is a perfect
time for snuggling...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-11-17 05:09 PM

November and February are considered the dreariest months of the year in this part of the world. You certainly proved that November is!

EA

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2002-11-17 05:13 PM

I liked it, but it made me feel a little cold....

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2002-11-17 05:14 PM

It was wonderfull, but it made me a little cold...

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-17 05:28 PM

(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is so very touching, sweet friend, I wish nothing but true happiness for you and Bryan forever together and for sunshine to even fill November days! (kiss on cheek) This is heartwarming, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-11-17 05:32 PM

A very timely and well written piece, Vandana.... November marks the beginning of the cold months, and its before our bodies have adapted to the cold after the warm summer...

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-11-17 05:48 PM

Vandana, this is lovely. The repetition of "cold" brings November to the forefront, and reminds us how alone we can feel when we are not warm. I so enjoy watching your writing grow and expand...you are becoming quite the poet...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-11-17 08:12 PM

Enjoyed much, Vandana. I love the cold chills of November.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 2002-11-17 09:38 PM

Very well done, Vandana!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2002-11-17 09:51 PM

November is such a cold, wet and dank month. I'll be happy to lend you my puff so you can snuggle up and keep toasty warm.

Marti

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-11-17 09:58 PM

Vandanna, I enjoyed reading your poem. It made me think of snuggling up with my my True Love.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-11-17 10:21 PM

Fantastic...James

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