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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-10-15 09:08 AM

stars twinkle, owls swoop
leaves rustle, breezes sweep in
mice scamper neath glades

©October 14, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-10-15 09:10 AM

And an excellent Haiku it is Virginia!
Love this one!
~Hugs and a good morning, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-10-15 09:20 AM

Beautiful Haiku Virginia.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-15 09:22 AM

..."owls swoop"

..."breezes sweep in"

Outstanding!

EA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-15 09:27 AM

Thanks, you three, you are very sweet and a good morning to you, too! This is the first stanza of what I'm hoping to be a series of three haiku about nature at night. So far, no new stanzas have come though, so I thought I'd go ahead and post this one.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2002-10-15 09:33 AM

A hoot of a Haiku

Very nicely done.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2002-10-15 09:59 AM

stars twinkle, owls swoop
leaves rustle, breezes sweep in
mice scamper neath glades

Moon drifts lazily
Silent wings catch dark breezes
Talons find scampers

Gloom

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-15 10:05 AM

Thanks, White Rose, and Gloom, that's exactly what would happen, I'm sure. Great addendum haiku!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2002-10-15 11:22 AM

Oh how I love haiku's and this is so good.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

9 posted 2002-10-15 11:58 AM

I salute your haiku...and the images it created in my imagination...compact but powerful...

...believe what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-10-15 05:40 PM

white heron cousin
lifts a veil from the shepherd
standing with nature

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a delightful haiku to light up this afternoon, God Bless You, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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