Open Poetry #23 |
Flowers from the Soddie |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Flowers~*~from the Soddie My love, he took indigo blue Captured up Queen Annie’s lace Dressed a cornhusk dolly, too Gave her such a style and grace My love, he took indigo blue Then took me by my hand Told me, I love you true As we walked along our land My love, he bent his back He broke the sod and green Worked without any slack He walked so tall and lean My love he took indigo blue Then took me by my hand Told me, I love you true As we walked along our land My love, he farmed our valley low But up there on our hill He let the wild indigo grow And Queen Anne’s lacy frill For my love took wild indigo blue Captured up Queen Annie’s lace Dressed me like a maiden fair Gave me such a style and grace My love he took indigo blue Then took me by my hand Told me, I love you true As we walked along our land. |
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jstewart Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 11 |
Wrote with passion, thank you for sharing. I love it. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A farmer and a gentleman, or was that...? Sorry, feelin' goofy tonight. I liked the line repetition, worked well. Love the choice of flowers. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, I like this. The flowers were beautiful, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*smile* I just had the kindest thought I have had about men in the last few months. I'm recovering! Oh no... Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is lovely, Karilea... The poem, the pics the flowers and especially the thoughts... ~ many loving hugs Lyra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If I can stop laughing at Kielo, as I ditto that sentiment (and I am not cured), I have to tell you how this almost changed my mind about the opposite sex, because it is just so perfect! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this is just beautiful! The pictures and the poem. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You can capture the love of a moment so well. So very expressively... as you have within this poem...of a time and place when life was far less complicated though very hard and demanding... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Karilea...beautiful...the blending of the words and the pictures... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah sweet Karilea... You know how much I love the Soddie series. This one is no exception...wonderful! Very much enjoyed, and the pics as well. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you always did/do make the soddie (or is it soddette) lovely.. |
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