Open Poetry #23 |
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As Hands of Time Move Slowly |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
My hands, cupped to hold all the tears... warmed to touch the fruits of passions of our night. Your hands, reaching to grasp, to hold desire's torch. Our hands, entwined in the throes of our nights. As the silk of curtains flow, the sheets of satin caress skins of tease. As our hands tremble and hearts beat as one while eyes touch eyes and lips caress. Spurring the fires, stirring coals of embers hot... into the night of late as hands of time move slowly around the room.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your words are always burning brightly like coals with loves beauty! (big hugggsssssss) May time become timeless to you always, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
All wishes for the romance that you so aptly present...true brilliance...the male gem. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! Is it hot in here or is it me? |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Romantic...Open...Nice. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Whew....Barry, this is so romantic and sensual....and done with a sense of class. It reminds me of the poetry my Gary sends to me. Thanks for sharing with us, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Magnus, Who but you, could turn a common extremity such as a hand into a most romantic, steamy love poem. And this: "eyes touch eyes" Oh, my..... Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Enjoyed. Thanks, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I think we need the air conditioner after reading that one, Barry.... Sensual and romantic ![]() Lyra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
AHHH! Lost in the magic! Hummm very nicely done Barry! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Barry~ This is so beautifully penned, my friend, and very romantic as well. I enjoyed this. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
I wished for a room once where it would just be someone's head resting on my knee this, is as luverly, as that... |
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