Dreaming About Living Without You

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Open Poetry #23

Dreaming About Living Without You

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-11-13 06:04 PM

Dreaming about
Living Without
You

I awaken and I find
that the woman I adore
doesn't love me anymore.
Why does it always
come to this?
I wager everything
I have and I lose
to loneliness.
Wait a minute.
She just called me.
Seems this was all
just a dream.
A very convincing dream.
But on the phone
she's telling me
that she's crazy
in love with me.
I sure have some
bad dreams.
I hope they never
come true.
I don't even like
dreaming about
living without
you.

JamesLee
November13
2002

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-13 06:05 PM

nightmare indeed.... hope they never come true for you either.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-13 07:34 PM

(big huggsssssss) Oh James, that to me too is the worst nightmare possible! (sad sigh) I too hope you forever on dream only happy dreams of being with your love and that it also comes true for you in reality, God Bless You, this is so well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-13 07:54 PM

Beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2002-11-14 06:50 PM

such a sweet poem- i loved this!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

angsana
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 77

5 posted 2002-11-14 08:56 PM

Still, I am glad that it's just a dream and hope it will never come true!

Lovely poem!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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6 posted 2002-12-14 04:06 AM

good one

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-07-19 11:18 PM

Thank you all for the nice responses...James

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