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I saw him today
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I saw him today |
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Mordecai's Mom New Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 8San Miguel, Ca |
I saw him today The man who took My world away I tried not to look But I couldn't resist I felt the anger and pain As I haven't seen him Since that awful night I started to tremble I started to sweat My knuckles went white Holding on to the wheel Thoughts racing through This brain of mine What was he going to do Did he notice me too He looked at me Rage filled his eyes He smirked at me Then drove on by I may see him again Somewhere down the road Beauty by day becomes magic by night...when dolphins dance on waves of light |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
if it is as I surmise it is chilling that he walks free. a harsh poem to read, but well written. its simplicity and honesty are give it power. -majnu |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Small world, especially when we don't expect it. Expressed your feeling well in here...the hurt, the fear...enjoyed it much. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Mordecai, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, some people can be so cruel and for such a cruel act like the one he did I can understand how impossible it is to forgive as he should be so ashamed! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs of sympathy your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mordecai, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-13-2002 02:57 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was just bone-chilling... So sorry. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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