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Open Poetry #23

Heaven's Loss

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-11-12 05:45 PM

Heaven's crystal chandeliers
crumble silently
their shards descend slowly
arriving secretly
piling up steadily
gleaming brightly
alighting softly
as sleeplessly
I watch.

[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-12-2002 05:47 PM).]

furlong
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 129

1 posted 2002-11-12 06:01 PM

ORSOME

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-11-12 06:22 PM

God's Tears perhaps? Radrook you have the most amazing way of describing things known of the soul.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

3 posted 2002-11-12 06:48 PM

nothing quite like a quiet windless snowfall:

fragile in freeze
they depend on the chill
created in freefall
to reach you, formed still

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-12 07:36 PM

(smiles) Snowflakes, yay, or it could be hail too! (sigh) You always describe everything so beautifully too, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

5 posted 2002-11-13 04:27 AM

Thanks everyone for the feedback.
Glad you enjoyed.
God bless!

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