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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-12 02:08 PM

Rough

here I am
unpressed
in creased clothes
wondering if
the light
at the end
of the tunnel
has a bulb
burnt out

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-11-12 02:15 PM

this is a perfect poem for a rainy day feel...

M

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2002-11-12 06:09 PM

Sure matches my day
Hardly noticed the fresh shirt I put on this morning
Are we on the same train . . .

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

3 posted 2002-11-12 07:03 PM

*smiles*!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-12 08:10 PM

(smiles) I just love your beautiful writing, sweet friend, I can sure that light in your words all the time, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2002-11-12 08:17 PM

Wrinkles are a part of life and make for a wonderful contrast to uniformity...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-11-12 08:20 PM

LOL@Mark's reply.
Much enjoyed the read Helen.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2002-11-12 11:19 PM

Gotta hate it, when this happens.
Liked this

Ed

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

8 posted 2002-11-13 12:12 PM

1slick_lady,

I hope the light bulb gets changed soon. Here's hoping for a brighter day tomorrow. I enjoyed your poem.

Dawn

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2002-11-13 01:23 AM

Helen,
Don't look now, but I think he is there in the dark...next to you! A wonderful picture you paint in this.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

10 posted 2002-11-13 01:24 AM

a nice quick bit.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

11 posted 2002-11-13 11:01 AM

Helen,
once again you and I are on the same page..

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-11-13 11:03 AM

Very nice poem.. Thank you for sharing

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I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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