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Open Poetry #23

Gloom’s Dark Domain

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-11-12 01:49 PM

Dark domain,
Eyes your soul and calls your name,
The echoes
Softly grows,
An evil hymn dread refrain,
Calling you,
Pulling you,
Mesmerize your frightened brain,
Realm of night
Stealing light,
Never viewing life the same,
Come hither
And feel you spirit wither.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-11-12 02:16 PM

when you "eye my soul" what do you see?

couldn't resist

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-11-12 02:16 PM

Oh Gloom!! Now I'm going to sit up all night!

Excellent write..but now I'm scared!
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
It whispers so listen closely~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2002-11-12 02:27 PM

Thank you, nakdthought,
Pleased you liked,
I would assume when eyeing your soul
I see thoughts unclothed by convention.

Thank you, Enchantress,
Well since you are going to be up all night
Weave me a spell make me a shell
To hide inside my dark domain
Least chaos drives us all insane.
Glad you enjoyed my humble works

Gloom

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-11-12 04:16 PM

Hymn of evil dread refrain
Draws me to your dark domain
Hypnotized by eyes of gloom
Pulled into your spirit room

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Inspirational sir. I hope you don't mind my poetic reply. I enjoy your work!

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