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The Ravens Song
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The Ravens Song |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Ravens Song Chaos shows a dragon’s mane Full of fire full of Cain Ravens splore a chorus caw Caws that spore deaths entrance door Foibles shine like gems at night Velvet back bring gems to bright Croaking frogs sing in roar Specters of a petit fore Morning brings a mist of dew Dew to sate the mornings coup Wetting dust of changing spore Wanderlust of shifting core Makes the mind to stay a goal Goal a light to sway a soul Phantoms play a knight in draft Seeking grails a soul to raft. Pay no heed to senseless rhyme Rhyming nonsense of our time. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Foibles shine like gems at night Velvet back bring gems to bright Croaking frogs sing in roar Specters of a petit fore Morning brings a mist of dew Dew to sate the mornings coup Wetting dust of changing spore Wanderlust of shifting core Makes the mind to stay a goal Goal a light to sway a soul Phantoms play a knight in draft Seeking grails a soul to raft. Pay no heed to senseless rhyme Rhyming nonsense of our time. ======================================= Oh..I learned a long time ago....there is always SENSE in your nonsense..ya just cant help yourself...youre full of it  *L*Specters of a petit fore could that line be any cooler??  Love the chaos in your caw me Stinkylove... me thinks Randys reving up to roar. lol *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, If I see spectors of Petit fores You better believe the frogs do roar.  WWRS |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Pay no heed to senseless rhyme Hey... that's no fair! You're telling people to skip everything I write... and I thought we were pals???? LOL Seriously, Seymour... I agree with JM... wisdom lurks within your every work... even when it hides behind laughter's skirts or dresses up in nonsense. *S* Which is why reading you is always a priority... and always rewarded. *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Rhyming nonsense....now, might that be an Oxymoron? nothing nonsense about your rhyme, nor has there ever been!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Randy brought his Raven? Oh heavens... the winds shift... hugs, Sy! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.! I have lent mine ear with great intent to thine's Raven's song --as always!---and with much admiration! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Barry, Oxymoron, good word, thanks my friend. Sunshine Hugs back. Earth Angel Hugs and thank you's. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, thanks for introducing me to splore- now if I only knew what it meant.  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sometimes I find there to be more sense in nonsense and more nonsense in sense, so I'll just pick nonsense thank you! (big huggsssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I just love how you express yourself, evermore the raven says, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Splore means, frolic or commotion. Thank you for the read. Noah, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks, it seems that I cannot x splore all that commotion through the door when are these words, that rushing in are indication of this thing? and could I frolic with this word? I think that this would be absurd Instead I'm saying nevermore, can I explain this poet's splore Nice work and I learned something. Next time I wish to frolic... I'll be splore footed Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Pay no heed to senseless rhyme? Now you know why I don't post anymore..LOL I love you as a crow flies Why? Just "beCAWS" great write Seye |
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