Open Poetry #23 |
In The Still Of The Night |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When most are sleeping in the still of the night I like to just listen and be real quiet The moon shining brightly in the dark velvet skies With stars sparkling so beautiful to my eyes If I will but listen your sweet voice I'll hear Whispering to me sofly close and into my ear I close my eyes as I feel your breath touch and hear you say, "Baby, I love you so much, More than the stars shining up in the sky Is my love for you, so, Love, please don't cry, I'm right there with you don't you ever fear Just listen real closely, and my voice you will hear We're always together to never be apart Holding together each other real close in our hearts" I LOVE YOU, BABY "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-12-2002 03:41 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I hope gary's listening... this was a very sweet goodnight kiss. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Karen. I do believe he hears me...I hear him whispering softly. "Love makes the world go around" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ethel, I envy this great love of yours, to keep this so well, so long. Ed (witch is an endearment for my friend Karen, she knows what I mean) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Ed, for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. BTW, I know that "witch" is the same as "sweetie" to your friend Karen. HaHa!! (Just like me calling her an imp or a little devil....) "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Lovely, real and you make it new. Thank you. etoodog |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
wonderful to love like this sweet friend! smiles, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this brought tears to my eyes because I dream so much of holding my Joanna and hugging her when she needs a shoulder to cry over or she just wants to feel loved like a teddy bear and seeing her gorgeous smile and hearing her sigh in her sleep beside me! (kiss on cheek) You always write such gorgeous love poetry I can relate to, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Robert, thanks so much for reading my poem and for your reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Cher, for your sweet reply. I appreciate it, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks very much, Noah. I really appreciate your reply. I'm glad that you have such a love with Joanna and can relate to my poems. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very sweet love poem with lots of heart Very nicely done, Ethel ~ hugs from my heart Lyra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Ethel, this is such a sweet special speak! ---Hey, that would make a great tongue-twister! ~ such a sweet special speak ~ say that three times fast! tehe I love this poem! Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Sweet Chippymunky... Thank you for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I appreciate it, dear friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, it does make a tongue-twister!! HeeHee!! Thanks for reading and for your sweet reply. I apprciate it. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-14-2002 07:52 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
It was beautifull, but for some reason it made me cry... Everyone's poems are making me cry.... "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel - A wonderful poem of true love. I enjoyed this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I'm sorry it made you cry. I was really sad when I wrote it, but I can almost hear Gary whispering to me not to cry. So, I try to cheer up and just hold on until we are together again. He wrote a really beautiful poem and sent it to me. I'd put it on here, but I don't know if it would be okay or not. He told me it would be, but it may be against the rules. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, thanks so much for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm a night owl too, so I can relate |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, Yeah, sometimes it's hard to sleep.... Thanks for reading.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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