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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-10-14 08:57 PM

Be My Love

Oh sure, you said you would
love me with all heart
and you said you would
love me forever and thats
a good start but I need
you right now today.
I can't bear to
have you so far away.
Come close to me.
So close that you will be
the only love my eyes can see.
So tight into my arms
that your love will become
a treasured part of me.
Show me that you
will be my love.

JamesLee
Oct15
2002
MyJin

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2002-10-14 09:03 PM

A very passionate write...intensely expressed...

...believe what your heart feels...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-14 10:30 PM

Beautiful write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-14 10:34 PM

Wonderful James...perfect!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-14 10:42 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is a beautiful heartfelt plea, sweet friend, I love it, may true happiness of love always fill your heart and may she give you all your heart desires, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-14 11:02 PM

James, this is so beautifully written. I hope that you will find true love, if you don't have it already, because I hear a twinge of sadness. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

Love To All,
Ethel

*Stubby*
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 122

6 posted 2002-10-14 11:42 PM

Beautiful reminds me of myself
thankyou J

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

7 posted 2002-10-14 11:57 PM

I can relate. Beautiful poem.

Dawn

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2002-10-15 01:17 PM

I would say that you've got it bad! The love bug has definitely taken a bite out of your heart!

If she read this poem, how could she resist answering your love call?

EA

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