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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-11-11 05:17 PM

Lips so soft and sensual
Full of passion and desire
We surrender to our emotions
As love's flame burns ever higher

A love to last eternally
Stretching far across the sea
Love simply has no boundaries
To my heart you hold the key

Tender kisses beneath the moonlight
Arm in arm along the shore
Like the ever returning tide
Your love reels me in once more

Love sets sail upon the ocean
Within my heart you now reside
Your love lights up my galaxy
In the sky our stars collide

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-11-11 05:43 PM

What beautiful soft images. A wonderful write for love.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-11-11 06:02 PM

I like this a great deal.

It is a ~pretty~ love poem, as nice as can be....

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-11 06:06 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I could see the stars splashing and falling in your heart from the heavens reading this, yay, may this love last to eternity, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

4 posted 2002-11-11 09:44 PM

So nice and with your poetry it's very realistic to believe. Thank you, where ever you are in the galaxy.

etoodog

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-11-11 10:12 PM

Sue: This is a lovely poem and has such tender feelings expressed in it. I really enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-11-11 10:30 PM

Hi Sue - This is lovely and I could hear the music as two people in loved floated across the universe.

'...Tender kisses beneath the moonlight
Arm in arm along the shore
Like the ever returning tide
Your love reels me in once more...'

Fantastic words ... huggles, Marti

angsana
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 77

7 posted 2002-11-11 10:43 PM

oh so sweet, soft and gentle, Sue!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-11-13 05:34 PM

Fabulously romantic...James

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-11-13 08:50 PM

I loved this poem,... Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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