Open Poetry #23 |
Memories |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Memories somewhat receding like the tides, they flow in and out some nights the thoughts leave me bleeding on others, the pain is in doubt. The memories, still a treasure of love in its rarest of forms and sadness I cannot measure if only true love was the norm. (this is an attempt to nudge my sleepy muse) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad but well-written, sweet friend, I too wish true love could be the norm for everyone but I know with all my heart this love will find you real soon and the memories the love wil produce will be like the sweet honey of a honeybees kneading! (sigh) I wish this for you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You, I am so happy to see you writing again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, I love your muse! These aren't easy memories but so well remembered. More...please. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well it was a good nudge indeed, and I loved this. I am emailing you your request right after lunch here. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write Sandra... I think your muse was just having a nap.. I most certainly missed reading your beautiful work. ~Hugs~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Seems the nudge turned into a shove, cause this is just wonderful. Huggles, Marti |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Memories somewhat receding like the tides, they flow in and out some nights the thoughts leave me bleeding on others, the pain is in doubt. The memories, still a treasure of love in its rarest of forms and sadness I cannot measure if only true love was the norm. Some day those memories will rise and sadness will recede Instead you'll feel that twinge of "sweet" the only want you'll need. And truly when your days pass on and night skies fill your view Happiness will be your norm true measures of what is You. It will happen Sandra, some day for the both of us... hugssssss I enjoyed your muse this evening *s M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your sleepy muse spoke familiar moments...beautifully. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, if only...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I think your nudge is helping, Sandra. This is wonderful. Hope to read more from you. |
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