Open Poetry #23 |
Autumn Rain |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Rain sounds different upon bed of leaves that now cover the ground of fall. Autumn colors that once swayed with breeze upon tree, now lie there, on lawn and street, soft crackling noise as the sweet rain of autumn cleanses the earth. WhiteRose 11/11/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
The rain drops remind me of when I was a small child during the long and quiet days hiding in the house afraid of the storms rampage but within a few years I would leave my safe domain and run like a lunatic in the slick streets drenched by the wet sheets from the sky love this poem Thomas |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Anne, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, though the spring is my favorite season because of the rain and flowers blooming I also love the fall rain because it is cool and comforting! (kiss on cheek) This is a lovely vision, sweet friend, yay, I love it, w eall love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Autumn, my favourite season, please send some of that rain down here Rose, we're in desperate need.. sigh. Beautifully written Maree. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i let out a sigh after reading this. half for the loss of summer, and half for the time before the coming spring, but you make even autumn somewhat pleasant. -majnu |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You make this sound so enticing and beautiful! Now if the 'sweet rain' could just clean AWAY all those leaves, I'd be ecstatic. Huggles, Marti |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely, calming write... Much enjoyed on this cool, dull autumn day. ~Hugs~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
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